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Of Pomegranates
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If only angels looked upon our love,
But how they’d smile, giggling at us,
At this, though common, sighing from above;
Beauty’s contained and found in all things just,
Delighting in the pomegranate’s seed,
For you alone the meaning’s not of lust,
For you, a mistress to your passion’s need,
Admitting vulnerability,
Have taken comfort following in my lead.
Through moments of joy and uncertainty,
Euphoria and pain become our worlds,
And we revel or cry in commonality;
At night, unfettered, lie we both unfurled
In nylon, silk, and satin ecstasy,
As the master-mistress in our thoughts we’re curled;
If only all life was such fantasy,
We’d still be standing high above the cove,
Instead, with trust our guide, we plunge towards destiny.
But how they’d smile, giggling at us,
At this, though common, sighing from above;
Beauty’s contained and found in all things just,
Delighting in the pomegranate’s seed,
For you alone the meaning’s not of lust,
For you, a mistress to your passion’s need,
Admitting vulnerability,
Have taken comfort following in my lead.
Through moments of joy and uncertainty,
Euphoria and pain become our worlds,
And we revel or cry in commonality;
At night, unfettered, lie we both unfurled
In nylon, silk, and satin ecstasy,
As the master-mistress in our thoughts we’re curled;
If only all life was such fantasy,
We’d still be standing high above the cove,
Instead, with trust our guide, we plunge towards destiny.
Given that I have never actually written a "normal" love poem, this one is no exception.
The perspective I was thinking of when I wrote this was an accepting relationship between a woman and a crossdresser (from the former's point of view). It probably is not representative (at all), it was merely an attempt.
The perspective I was thinking of when I wrote this was an accepting relationship between a woman and a crossdresser (from the former's point of view). It probably is not representative (at all), it was merely an attempt.
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It's very romantic and erotic. Beautifully descriptive words and the rhythm is quite elegant.